国士爱剑仙 发表于 2017-10-1 18:50:44

很好看,给作者大大点个赞!!

糖糖爱吃糖 发表于 2017-10-2 17:12:41

严重缺粮,只好来找找英文同人了,我糟糕的英语看起来有点费力,这文还蛮有意思的,结合有道翻译,看得七七八八,教授很好,就是小哈有点太纯情了~

ianvalier 发表于 2017-10-2 22:34:27

被题目吸引进来,被简介吓到,最后又被内容甜回来

玻璃糖果罐 发表于 2018-8-17 11:37:35

小白哈利讓人超想吃乾抹淨,但這OOC程度......哈利你真的17歲嗎

aikozhang 发表于 2018-9-14 12:07:56

小哈好可爱!虽然感觉有点傻乎乎~~哈哈

R-mii 发表于 2018-9-23 23:55:59

小哈有些不像17岁emmm文荒艰难嗑文英

jeanne1006 发表于 2018-10-2 11:55:22

這小哈純潔到需要教授手把手的教導(紳士的引誘?

lomming 发表于 2019-9-13 11:20:46

原來是約會啊,哈哈.後面應該會更精彩

923 发表于 2019-10-6 23:04:36

好吧,太棒了,喜欢喜欢!真是够了可爱的小白哈:kaixin:

Teacup29 发表于 2019-10-21 08:56:50

As our fellow shipper has said, a seventeen year old who knows almost nothing about sex seems a bit too....unrealistic. I do get the point though, that the author is trying to portray a figure of naive teenage boy to set up the meaty part in future. A for effort, but sadly out of character.
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