痴汉少年灰酱 发表于 2016-10-4 22:44:59

原谅我英文渣根本看不懂…然而却为了积分混进来增加回复……捂脸

t0298922 发表于 2016-10-5 16:51:48

In their eyes We are the enemy But we are actually lovers love each other-
在他們眼裡我們是敵人,而我們其實是戀人彼此相愛

白纻 发表于 2016-10-7 17:34:28

从未想过英语好的多余用处……感谢猫爪的各位。感谢楼主。

exoshenny 发表于 2016-10-22 18:48:42

作为看故事的人,觉得暗恋时期的朦胧暧昧的感觉非常棒,虽然对于主角来说是痛苦的

千山凝碧 发表于 2017-6-18 20:00:06

Harry is not to be control anymore,Malfoy isn't a Slytherin from head to food.That's my willing.居然要加中文。不是说尽量用英文回复么。

芷药 发表于 2017-7-16 19:14:53

Lovely story.
I particularly like how Harry addresses Draco in the letters. That is so cute that I can almost touch the lovely pink bubbles between the two. Besides, this piece of work has slow build up, which reminds me of another Drarry fic Ten Steps. I like it when you know for sure that they will end up between sheets but simply don't know when. Additionally, virgin Harry is so well depicted! I enjoy seeing that instead of shagging Draco senseless, he carefully consults Draco's ex, faces up to his own sense of insecurity and even prepares lubricant for himself lol. I guess this is when his Slytherin's side interacts with his Gryffindor part. Bravery is not without fears but being able to confront and combat them so good job Harry!
Something to consider: I can't accept the plot that Draco kills his father because Lucius wants to hurt Ron and Hermione (he doesn't even use an avada! Killing his father beacuse he casts a Cruciatus to Harry's friend doesn't seem like Draco, because I regard him as the type that values his family members much). Also for me Draco in this story is going a little too soft and too much like a protagonist. I think he couldn' have got on such good terms with Weasely and Granger that quickly. Spite and venom is just a part of him which he can't dispose of that quickly.But they are just my personal views and overall it's definetely worth reading.
可以可以写这么长说我字数不足这就很233了。少爷有点理想化了不过本身同人嘛写成这样很不错了反正不会写文的我肯定写不出来这么可爱的文章~

Estelle_Ackles 发表于 2017-7-28 23:35:54

一直以为专业是英语的好处就是可以啃生肉同人……然而是我想太多catsa17paw
还是有很多词要查了才懂不然就不理解意思嘤嘤嘤
不过真的是个好温暖的故事啊 如果可以一直这样幸福下去就好啦

cats 发表于 2018-8-8 17:15:54

The secret angle game is great, so suitable for writing love stories
I played that game before in secondary school, it reveals lots of gossip in our class^^
And I like the setting that Harry and Draco have secretly admired each other for a long time

Rustii203 发表于 2018-9-12 22:15:59

wow this one i could read smoothly%image089** simple story, combining pieces throughout all these years! that kind of little sour plus sweet feeling really gets me%image020**

xzmdc· 发表于 2019-1-15 20:50:10

great writing style! hope you can tranport more articles like this,thank you!
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